Monster's In My Head

After reading "Mrs. Kelley's Monster" by Jon Franklin, I was amazed at how well the writer was able to keepme interested throughout the entire story. The words that Franklin used throughout the piece stuck out and drew my attention in, such as "skull" instead of just saying "head," when describing Mrs. Kelley's illness. The ending was pretty sad but it defintly left me satisfied as a good ending point. I think the way that Franklin structured the story was interesting because of how short some of the paragraphs were like "It is 6:30 a.m. was a full paragraph by itself. All and all I enjoyed the story and hope everyone else did too!